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Protyekbar asar age maa jante chan, amar kichhu lagbe-tagbe kina. protyekbar-i ami boli, kichchhu lagbe na. bishesh kore khabardabar anar to kono manei hoyna. ekhane sob pawa jay.
Ar sotyi bolte ki, ekta somoyer por tiler naRu khete pachchhina keno sei du:khe buk phateo na. Out of sight, out of mind.
Maa “tothastu” bole suitcase bojhai kore narkel ar tiler naRu, Bapi chanachur, badamer tokti niye asen. ar segulo hojom korar jonyo dubotol Sorbiline. Pepto-bismol ke maa praN thakte bhorsa koren na.
Raag korbo bhabi. boyos to hoyechhe. ei boyose oto bhari suitcase etoduur tene tene anar kono maane hoy? kintu maa naRur kouto ar hojomer oshudher shishir por suitcase-er tola theke emon koyekta jinis baar kore anen, jate amar raag-taag gole jol hoye jay.
Bangla boi. bNadhai-khola, luchibhaja, lokkobar poRe konthostho hoye jawa boi. nachhoRbanda, attention-lobhii. jara school theke phire uniform chhaRar somoytuku porjonto dito na. maa chole jawar por hothat khali hoye jawa ghorer du:kho bholateo jader juRi nei.
Sedin office theke phire tader ektake niye sofa-r koNe gutishuti mere bosechhi.Heat-er kNata opore thhele diyechhi, Kulu theke kena rong-chota shaalta diye paayer pata duto besh kore dhekedhuke niyechhi. Sofa-r haatole rakha chayer cup theke dhNoya uthhchhe. janalar kNach beye shiiter raat kromosho namchhe ghono hoye.
Ek kothay, murder mystery poRar jonyo er theke adorsho poribesh ar hotei parena. esomoy jodi gotakoyek mundu-thNyatlano, roktato mritodeho chhoRanochhitono ekkhana golpo haate ase, ar lekhoker haater taar jodi temon hoy, tobe poRte poRte gaaye kNata debei debe. ghaR ghoralei buk chNyat kore uthhbe, gloves pora dukhana udyoto haat chokite sore gelo na ki? Bathroom-e jete hole roommate-er abhabe jiibone prothombar kanna pabe.
Athocho amar kebol gatrodaho chhaRa ar kichchhu hochchhilo na. raage du:khe hotashay mathar chul chhNiRte ichchhe korchhilo pray.
Bishokriyay mrityu athocho autopsy shobdota ekbarer jonyo keu mukhe anchhe na?? sakkhiider jobanbondite aysa boRoboRo phNak, alibi niye keu gaa-i korchhe na. goyendar heldolmatro nei. tini kebol khNoj niye beRachchhen golper patropatriira keu karo preme poRechhilo kina. jeno noronaariir prem chhaRa prithibiite ar kono khuner motive thakte nei. Fingerprints nei, kanagolite ga-chhomchhome pichhu newa nei, gobhiir raater niirobota phalaphala kore gorje otha bonduk nei, dhuurto villain-er akothyo shoytani nei. se na thakukge, grey matter-er jholsani to thakbe?
Kothay ki.
Kichhui holo na. kebol ektar por ekta khun hoye jete laglo. sheshe 4te khun howar por hothat ekdin sobaike boithokkhana ghore deke ene bistor jolghola kore goyendaprobor khuniike bar kore dilen. sobai akash theke poRlo, pathok shuddhu, karoN 350 patar goppe khuniiir somporke lekhok 35 ta shobdo-o khoroch korechhen kina sondeho.
Sobai jokhon ese chhNeke dhorechhe, “kii kore bujhlen?” goyenda ekpeshe haasi diye bollen, omuk dine omuk natoker rehearsal dekhte giye khuniir chokhemukhe je abyakto abeg phute uthhte dekhechhilen tini, seiti-i hochchhe ei case-er “turning point”.
Ar mohilachoritroder kotha to joto kom tola jay totoi mongol. sokolei “toptokanchanborNa”, sokoler chokhei “asohay, boba drishti.” sokolei keboli kNade, phule phule kNade, phNupiye phNupiye kNade. Deadbody-r opor achhRe poRe buk chapRe kNede crime scene-er dofarofa kore.
Koshtota aro beshi hochchhilo karoN ei golpoguloi ekdin amay nawakhawa bhuliyechhilo. egulo poRe uddipto hoyei ekdin ami mone mone thik korechhilam, boRo hoye goyenda golpo na likhte parle bNeche labh nei. tokhon to jantamna amar jonyo pothe apekkha kore achhen Dorothy Sayers, Miss Marple, Poirot, Jack McCoy. aporadhii ar aporadhjogoter abishwasyo sob kahinir duronto ghuurijhoRe jNara ekdin amay uRiye niye jaben. amake ar amar chhotobelar shokher sotyosondhaniider.
Haayre Nihar Ranjan.

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  1. Ami jani. Eta just mana jay na je chotobyala-r kichu kharap lagche, ba otota bhalo lagche na. nijeke kemon jyano kritoghno, beshi ghyam hoye gyache, oporadhi type lage. kintu oi, tumi ja bolle! aar eta kyano goyenda golpe-r khetrei beshi beshi hoy, ta jani na. kintu hoy. ekshobaar hoy. aar protibaar ami boita ke jotno kore nijer jaygay rekhe, "amar i kono dosh hoyeche" bole fire jai...

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  2. Ami Nihar Ranjan poRini, kintu khanikta holeo mohobhango amar idaning Feluda poRleo hoy. Byaparta khub du:kher, karon Feludake, Robi Thakurer bhashay bolte gele, "Feluda bole bhalobasi, bhalo bole noy."

    Tobe duto onyo unrelated katha boli - prothomoto oi out of sight out of mind byaparta onyo jiniser kkhetre holeo jilipir kkhetre hoyni dekhlam... ar ashchorjyer byapar holo ami sheeter chhutite jakhon deshe jaai takhon amader baRir ase pase kono mishtir dokane Jilipi banayna. Bolle bole sheetkale naki jilipi hoyna!

    Arekta katha holo je apnar oi raktomakha matha thyantlano mritodeher barnona shune amar jetar katha mone poRlo seta dekhe kal na takiyei Sumana paliyechhe... seta holo dokane rakha Halloween decoration ar Halloween costume pora manush. Akekta dekhe amari bhoy lagchhilo. Ki bibhatso eder festival bolun to?

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  3. Sumana, ekkebare thik bolechho. mone hoy amari dosh, ingriji boi poRte shikhe saaper pNach paa dekhechhi, eisob. kintu sotyike aswiikar korao shokto.

    Sugata, Feluda niye kono kotha hobena.

    seki, jilipio ki seasonal food hoye gelo naki? joghonyo. ar Halloween amar anyotomo kharap laga utsab. eke to dhaRidhaRi chhelemeye, jeans ar t-shirt pore ese treat chay. amar oder boyos niye kono apotti nei, kintu eto phNakibaji kiser? ektu sajle pare to? ar Kroger-er aisle-er aRal theke achomka haaRhim kora khune hasi, ekkothay bodkhot chaRa ar kichhu na.

    sobtheke boRo kotha kumRo niye ekta gota desh/jaati ki kore ei porimaNe uttejito hote pare, ami seriously bhebe kuul paina.

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  4. happy halloween tomader sobaike.. jodio ekhono deri achhe... kumro niye boshe gechho to?
    ar ei feeling ta kintu byomkesh porle hobe na, i bet.. nihar ranjan amar chirokal i ektu **** lagto... term ta bollam na fan ra dukhoo pabe bole.. jakge..
    feluda niye keu kichhu bolle ami kintu komor bendhe prostut.. aane do ek ek karke !

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  5. Feluda'r kon golpo tomar bhalo laglo na Sugato? Ami to ekhono Feluda ke flawless mone kori. Amar kichhu mohobhango hoyechilo last year Anandamela pore. Amazon e anandamela paoya jaye dekhe globalization er joygaan geye kinechilam, bodhoy expedited shipping eo aniyechilam. Office theke phirey ready hochilam Arnab er sange marpit korbar jonye, ke agey porbe ei niye. Porte giye dekhlam ar bhalo laglo na. Arjun er golpo tay o kono interest pelam na....onekdin boi ta porechilo Arnab er nightstand e. Or o ar porte ichhe koreni. Either lekha gulo jolo hoye jacche or amra boro hoye hotka hoye jachi..

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  6. Sohini, ki jani, ami asole bhule gechhilam Nihar Ranjan kemon lagto chhotobelay. tobe bishwas koro ebar poRe jemon laglo, serokom je lagtona e ami holof kore bolte pari.

    haha Sayari, ja bolechho. amaro dharoNa golpora achhe golper jaygatei, amrai hotka hoye jachchi. ar Feludar flawlessness niye ami tomar sathe ekkebare ekmot.

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  7. Ei re... Feludar naame kichhu bolle je mohila pathoke ra "Re-Re" kore teRe aste paren seta amar bhaba uchit chhilo. Ami motei omni kore bolini... mane kono Feludar galpo poRte kharap legechhe seta aami motei bolina. Kintu oi pathoker kachhe clue expose kore dewa, ba plot-er abhinabotwo, ba pathok ke investigation er sange up-to-date rakha - ei bishoygulo te Feluda ke ami ektu pichhiyei rakhbo. Feludar oi je gotadin beriye tadonto kore fera, oita ekta baRo weakness- Feluda kothay gelo, ki ki jante parlo, segulo to ami jante parchhina. Tobe Satyajit Ray'r lekhar guune, ar Jatayur moton ekjon character thakar foley Feluda poRte khubi bhalo laage.

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  8. thik achhe sugato, tomake ebarer moto maap kora gelo .... :)

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